ENGL1301 Rhetoric and Composition

The following paper deals with the rhetorical analysis of the previous assignment and aims to identify the areas wherein I might have to improve the skills that have demonstrated in the composition of the previous assignment. The paper looks into the four major areas wherein I might improve and further proceeds to review the areas wherein I have demonstrated a commendable work. As I consider my profile paper, I am able to identify the writing components in the paper that support the thesis and those that are absent that weaken the paper.

The profile paper that I had previously composed had demonstrated a lack in the various matters that needed to be included in the concerned paper. The profile paper that I had composed earlier had demonstrated a severe lack in the various matters including the lack of the quotations that might have been useful in the demonstration of the qualities of the concerned entrepreneur who had demonstrated a huge amount of success in the promotion and the upliftment of the concerned brand of mobile phones. In order to increase the credibility and the authenticity of the information that is presented within the concerned paper. The paper had also demonstrated in its composition the fact that there is a lack of the action that needed to be depicted in the concerned assignment. The profile paper that had been composed earlier tended to put forth the description of the product rather than focusing on the initiatives that were taken by the co-founder of Apple, the well-known manufacturer of the various technological products like laptops, mobile handsets and desktops.

The paper might also look forward to the fact that my skills in making the notes on the information that has been obtained from the various sources and the annotation of the concerned sources. The profile paper lacks the information that has been presented in the sources and tends to concentrate on one single source for the majority of the information that is being presented in the concerned profile paper. The paper majorly draws on the websites that are not considered to be authentic sources and thus might lead to the doubts in the matters that relate to the credibility and the authentic nature of the information that is taken from the concerned sources. The profile paper also depicts the lack of the information in the matters that dealt with the innovative measures and the technological advances that might have been brought forth by the incorporation of Steve Jobs as the co-founder of the technology magnet, Apple.

Despite all these shortcomings in the composition, the profile paper depicted a number of skills on the part of the composer. The composition of the paper depicted a well-formed introduction to the paper.  The thesis statement of the paper is related to the genre of the concerned paper in discussion. The thesis of the paper is observed to have been depicting the genre of the profile paper in an appropriate manner.

Thus, from the above discussion it might be pointed out that the profile paper depicts the presence of the points that are necessary for the compositional skills of the concerned students. The analysis of the profile paper has revealed the areas wherein my compositional abilities need to be sharpened as well as points out the areas that might depict my compositional skills.

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